Ron Clark wrote in
:

On 18 Sep 2003 07:37:00 -0700, (J C-W)
wrote:

Hi,

I've just put up plans on a site for a low budget external pre-filter
for small to medium ponds, particularly aimed at amateur or novice
pond owners in the UK, although the principles are generally
applicable anywhere. Find it at
http://www.collinswebb.plus.com/otherstuff/

Constructive comments gratefully received.

This group is not a commercial billboard.

So far as I can see, this page is a DIY guide by an enthusiast. It is not
selling anything. Have you actually looked at it?

Jason, I find your text rather hard to read in such big chunks, specially
full-screen on my high-res monitor.

You might want to break it down into smaller paragraphs, or maybe numbered
steps?

Victoria